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my own worst enemy

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I sit and stare accross the room
she stares back at me,
my own worst enemy.
we stare and stare,
both blink
how quickly friend turns to foe
and happiness to woe.
i sit and stare,
but no matter where
i move, my reflection also goes.
i do ot know what will become of me!
for i am my own worst enemy.

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Fault_Line02:
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Awesome poem! 5/5.


2010-02-06 05:24:32
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Rabidbadger 011:
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Awesome. Awesome as cacti. Which are awesome. 5/5.


2010-02-05 02:32:13
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Holy Quacamole:
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Good concept for a poem.
Good poem itself...
Only one typo, and a good preview image!
Like it.


2010-01-27 10:42:20
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whitana11:
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*******disclaimer************* do not concider myself my own worst enemy... it's just a poem!
just making sure...


2010-01-26 22:07:45
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StarlitHope:
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Omg that is awesome.


2010-01-26 22:00:44


   
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